Tuesday, January 26, 2010

smudge - part 1

One day, not so long ago, and through the forest deep and steep and slippery covered with seaweed and mud. Through the squishy , icky mud. Through the tall tall grass. Over the short ,short hills. Through the cold wind. A mother turtle had went to lay her eggs in the nest she made. The egg was kind of not white. But the more the wind blowed, the more it would get bright. One afternoon, the egg had hatched. The baby turtle has grown into 5 years old. And his name is Smudge. Smudge loved to explore. One evening, Smudge went and saw a beautiful view. After lunch time Smudge went out again to find the view. But to his surprise, it was gone. The again he went to bed. the next morning the same thing happened. The view was gone after lunch and he got there by night. Only where the view was there. Smudge looked down at his feet and thought "maybe the view is just a dream." As he was walking away, he was not tired so then it was morning and once he looked at the view, he knew what was going on. It was not a dream from last night's sleep. the view only came out in the afternoon. SO it was an afternoon view. No wonder it did not come in the darkness.
And that is the end of Smudge's view.

2 comments:

  1. Dear Ro Ro...you are making Masi very proud, and Masi thinks you can be a real writer , you can write a fabulous story book and keep everyone glued to the pages..you are very talented . :)

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  2. Loved the suspense, loved the pace. I agree with This is That. You are a real writer. Do keep writing, my little genius!

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